Dictionary+Essay+and+Reflection

For my college prep. class i wrote an essay arueing on whether i was for the dictionary being prescriptive or descriptive. i choose to argue the dictionary should be more descriptive. Descriptive means one word one word one definition and not so liberal like the dictionary is now.

i think the strongest element of myu essay would be my logical thinking on the matter. I know i didnt use the claims and focus sentences as to book as i should have but i still beleive it is well written,

In this essay i seemed to mix fact and policy claims. Maybe next time i will be more definate in my claims.